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August 24, 2014

A Place to Stand

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jimmysbacaYears ago I lived in Santa Fe and went to hear Jimmy Santiago Baca read from his poignant memoir, A Place to Stand. It was not possible to take my eyes off him as he read nor to get distracted by the many people in the room. I hung onto every word. His story is not your everyday memoir. For those of you who haven’t read A Place to Stand, I will not give away his story; you must read it for yourself. There is no doubt in my mind that Jimmy’s story will renew your faith in the power of a person’s inner spirit or embolden you to walk through your own difficult and challenging times with your eyes looking straight ahead and perhaps with a pen in your hand to document it all.

If you only read one book for the next ten years it should be A Place to Stand. If you are still wanting to read more about Jimmy Santiago Baca, read his poetry, Poems for Esai. The power of his memoir and poetry has inspired me to share this with you.

And if you want to see his 2 minute video that will bring you to warm-hearted tears, watch this:

Keep the pen moving!

Jan, CEO and Founder of About the Author Network

August 14, 2014

Enter the First Paragraph Contest!

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“First Paragraph” Contest Now Open
By Matilda Butler, Award-winning author of the collective memoir Rosie’s Daughters: The “First Woman To” Generation Tells Its Story and Writing Alchemy: How to Write Fast and Deep and Co-Founder
Faster than a speeding bullet.
In a New York minute.
Life in the fast lane.
Everywhere we turn, we are told to move quickly, get the job done, reach the next goal. Even Amazon urges us to “Order in the next 23 minutes to get this item by tomorrow.” 
So it’s not surprising that when we begin a memoir or novel, we want to toss off a paragraph or two to get the book started. Then we can get on with the serious business of telling our story.
Wait. Slow down. Give careful attention to the first sentence, the first paragraph, the first page. The opening of your book is your first, best, and perhaps only opportunity to get your reader interested. The opening is much more than a hook to grab your reader, but the hook needs to be there. You might consider the words of Marcus Tullius Cicero: “It is not by muscle, speed, or physical dexterity that great things are achieved, but by reflection, force of character, and judgment.”  
Use the seven items below to help with your reflection, force of character, and judgment when crafting your opening:
1. Hook your reader; compel him or her to want to know what comes next. Don’t think the reader will be patient with you until you can get around to the actual story.
2. Lean in. Share a sense of excitement as you build energy both in your story and in the reader’s anticipation.
3. Create the beginning of a relationship with the reader–a relationship that will deepen over the following pages.
4. Set the tone. If you begin with humor or horror then you have set the reader’s mind. 
5. Establish the point of view.
6. Show tension — internal or external.
7. Foreshadow the larger issue/problem/story.
The opening can be written in as many ways as there are authors and stories. I’ve asked students to write two completely different openings to a memoir vignette and then explain what they like and dislike about each. Next the rest of the class shares their reactions. It is fascinating how one opening is almost universally considered better by the whole group. Usually it has to do with an emotional link to the story. 
What’s the Opening to Your Memoir or Novel?
Pamela Jane Bell, author of fiction and nonfiction books, is a regular guest blogger at  She has announced a FIRST PARAGRAPH contest and we want to invite you to submit your first paragraph. Perhaps you will be one of our winners. Be sure to click on the link below right away and get all the details. Then remember to submit before September 3. Winners will be announced in late September.
Now get to writing!
Thank you Matilda,
Jan, CEO and Founder of About the Author Network

The Strangest Book I’ve Ever Written

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Watch this video to hear my book reading on the strangest book I’ve ever written.

Jan, CEO and Founder of About the Author Network helping writers and authors promote their work and keep their pens moving.

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