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May 2, 2017


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Janhawaii2015 Okay, let”s put this myth to rest. There is no such thing as writer’s block. When you sit staring at the page, tune in. Are you pushing your mind — well — stop it — our minds don’t like to be pushed. Instead, stretch, drink some water or tea, walk in meditation, or write about how the blank page makes you feel. Pushing words to form is ineffective. Everything stops for a reason. It is not a block, it is a moving in a different direction. I speak more about this in my book, The Mindful Writer, Still the Mind, Free the Pen. Next time you think you have writer’s block, write about the feeling of the ‘block’. You’ll see. You will be writing in no time.

Keep the pen moving,

Jan and


April 30, 2017

Point of View

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jan pen ink for web Try this! Take an experience in your life, one that has some emotional juice. Write it out in all its glory. Then rewrite it in the third person. Then rewrite it again back into the first person. Now look at the two first person pieces. Notice how you wrote the second first person piece in more detail or started at a different point or even wrote with more emotion. This is a great technique for letting go of the experience , to gain some distance from it allowing you to drop down deeper into it by rewriting the first person.

Keep the pen moving,

Jan and

April 8, 2017

He Said – She Said.

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Boys Fishing Ever overhear a conversation. “And then she said,” one person would say. “And then I said,” he would explain. Write out a dialogue that you witnessed. If you can’t find one, write one in which you were part. Put in details such as tone of voice, dialect, pitch, volume, smell of breath, form of mouth, teeth description, lip size, or other details. Get out your Thesaurus and find alternative descriptive words. Writing takes one thing and one thing only: practice.

Keep the pen moving,


March 23, 2017

Flash Fiction

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Long Stem Red RoseA single rose.   callalilly A tall and regal calla lily.   KODAK Digital Still Camera  A cypress tree.

Write a flash fiction piece, between 250 and 750 words, about what it means for a character named Alice to plant these in her small backyard just as she was embarking on a healing journey from a broken heart.

Keep the pen moving,


March 16, 2017


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idea Ever wake at 3 in the morning with an idea and think you’re going to remember it when you wake up? What happens? About dinner time you remember you had some idea that you can’t remember and wish you had written it down. So, keep a pad and pencil by your bed. You can write in the dark — in the morning you will have some notes to help you recall what woke you up. I’ve written many pieces that woke me in the middle of the night. Those are the ideas with power. No need to turn on the light and don’t take time to turn on devices. Just write and . . .

keep the pen moving,


July 19, 2014

Journaling and Writing are Soul Mates

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Journaling and Writing are Soul Mates

by Mari L. McCarthy

I am a journal writing therapist. I believe passionately in the power of daily pen-to-the-page journaling to heal, grow, and become the person we were meant to be.  But the practice of journal writing provides more than therapy. One of the wonderful benefits of a regular journaling practice is improvement in your writing skill.  When you play a musical instrument, you practice playing scales. Journal writing is like playing scales for other kinds of writing. Like a beloved soul mate, journaling improves, encourages, and adores your “real-world” endeavors of all kinds.  Just playing with the tools, the words, the composition of thoughts and stories is the kind of practice journaling allows. You’re not required to be entertaining; you need not be an accomplished writer in your journal. All you want to do is express, tell the story, unload the heartache, voice the joy. There’s no objective, apart from completing your daily entry.

Journaling is you speaking to you, which is a nicely safe space. But it’s actually not speaking at all – it’s writing, and that involves words and paper and pen and that magical transformation that happens with any clear articulation. As soon as you can describe, tell, communicate any message or story, you free it to live and transcend and grow. So how exactly does this intimate everyday ritual of journaling relate to you as a writer of published works? Journaling is all very well, but those handwritten notebooks live comfortably on the shelf. Your published work, on the other hand, is out there for all the world to see. What’s the connection between them?

Well, there are many answers to that question. Here are just a few:

  1. Journaling is a writing habit you practice regularly, so it is naturally very likely to improve your ability to write with ease.
  2. Journaling that is pen-to-page involves neuromuscular development and coordination of body and mind. In our digital age, there’s little opportunity to exercise the hand’s creativity, but when we do practice working with the hands, we notice many benefits.
  3. Journaling is introspective and invites free expression, helping to loosen up your access to honest, raw emotions.
  4. Journaling shows us better who we are and this knowing makes our published work more honest.
  5. Journaling helps us find solutions to problems, and we can use the same process in our writing that is meant for an audience. Read over the stories you have told, the knots that have unraveled (or not!) in your journal, and mimic their progress in the writing you do for publication.

A musician does scales. A painter sketches constantly. An entrepreneur dabbles in initiatives; a politician talks and talks some more. Every passion has its practice soul mate.

  • Are you a beginning writer? Then journal to discover your unique voice and the stories that you feel compelled to tell.
  • Are you an intermediate writer? Then journal to deepen your effect.
  • Are you an advanced writer? Then journal to keep yourself honest!

A writer journals because the business of writing is writing; and journal writing is the most efficient and effective way to hone that skill every day!


Mari L. McCarthy is The Journaling Therapy Specialist, founder of Create Write Now (, the Transform Your Life Journaling Place. She offers counseling and encouragement to journal writers through her many online Journaling for the Self of It TM resources, as well as private consultations. Mari’s the community manager on the CreateWriteNow Facebook page and she often leads online journaling challenges. Mari lives in Boston where she raises roses and consciousness.

Thank you Mari for this fabulous article and I encourage all my readers to check out Mari’s blog and sign up for her newsletter. You won’t be sorry.

As always, keep the pen moving,




February 3, 2014

Read to Write Better!

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Jan Marquart Author (1)(1)Do you have a favorite author? How many books have you read by that author? There are many benefits to reading everything your favorite author has written:

1. you get to watch the writer grow in his/her craft,

2. you get to study how to become a better writer by reading the varieties of descriptions they use for similar scenes, and

3. you get a better understanding of the author’s writing life which can become quite comforting if judge your struggles as unique.

Having read all of Elizabeth Berg’s books, I have found her descriptions of similar scenes inspiring to continue to search for different perspectives on the same theme. Finding these gems in stories can widen your use of the craft. One of the things see describes in many of her books is: snow. Below is a list of four descriptions of snow she used in four of her books.

1. I could not locate my favorite description of snow to relay it to you verbatim, but I will paraphrase.

She describes snow as ‘communion wafers’.

2. In True to Form, p.29, she writes:

White snow covers tan

It looks to me like crumb cake

Nourishment for eyes.

3. In Open House, p. 169, she writes:

Snow is falling lazily, fat flakes that look like cut-up pieces of lace.

4. In The Pull of the Moon, p. 85, she writes:

I want one bedroom painted a blue leaning toward purple, and I want that room kept empty except

for the fill of light and the dust motes, drifting down like inside snow.

5. In Range of Motion, p. 89, she writes:

Winter and the snow falling in fat flakes, a silhouette before glass, fire.

So the next time you are enamored by an author, buy another one of his/her books and see what he/she can teach you about writing creatively. I promise you, descriptions will be interwoven in the story so pay attention. I am not a big proponent of writing in books but a pencil can always be erased and post-it notes are wonderful tags to quickly identify tips when you need them.

Read everything, write enough to keep the pen moving,

Jan, CEO and Founder of About the Author Network

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October 11, 2011

Are Your Characters Realistic?

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This might seem as if I’m stating the obvious, but your characters and the situations you put them in MUST be realistic. I’ve edited several manuscripts in which scenes and the response of characters were off track. I’ll share some of them with you and let you decide.

In one manuscript a young female scientist was assaulted by one of her co-workers with whom she was engaged in a short romantic relationship. The rape scene was written in excruciatingly realistic details. They struggled by the fire as she tried to break up with him and ward off his sexual advances. The struggle got violent. He took a knife and sliced open her cheek, ripped her clothing. There was blood everywhere. Afterwards he fled from the home and the woman got up, drove to her friend’s home, sat and drank a cup of tea while trying to decide whether to report her co-worker. Okay, what is wrong with this picture? Would you sit and have a cup of tea with a woman whose face was bleeding and whose clothes were torn who had just been raped? Would you not call the police, get her to the hospital, give her clean clothes? None of the conversation or action went to anything along those lines. What would you do if you had been raped and cut? What would you do if you opened the door and saw your friend’s face open and bleeding with torn clothing?

In another manuscript an alcoholic mother verbally abused her teenage daughter, denied her basic needs and slept with any man she met often with the teen in view of it all. But the author made references to the mother as a kind and caring mother. I know alcoholics can be Dr. Jeckyls and Mr. Hydes but show that discrepancy through the mother’s behavior, not the author’s description or commentary. In discussing these contradictions in the manuscript with the author, she told me she was trying to resolve conflicts she had with her own alcoholic mother. The author used her manuscript, which was a novel, as a way to proclaim her own love for her mother in spite of the pain inflicted on her. That’s okay to do, but write it as a memoir if that’s your plan. Work it out in a venue that makes it realistic and seduces the compassion of the reader.
Does this make sense to you?

A book I read years ago described a female character and her relationship to a man she met. The author revealed the woman’s internal thoughts about that man as nontrusting but her behavior continued throughout the story as loving and desirous of a relationship with him. I kept waiting for an explanation of this discrepancy. Unless the story is about a woman struggling to keep herself safe from a sociopath, this dynamic was unrealistic. There was no mention of the woman having a mental health disorder either. Something to substantiate the actions of the woman in line with her thoughts and fears was missing. Perhaps if the author didn’t describe in acute detail the thoughts of the woman, her desires for the man would have made sense. As it was written, this woman’s behavior made no sense.

Examine your characters and the scenes they are in. Read them to several people and ask if the character and the scenes of events that follow are realistic.

When I wrote Kate’s Way I had to make sure that the character Joker, a schizophrenic, was realistic in his behavior as well as the inpatient unit in which he was placed. Luckily, being a social worker and having worked with that mental health center, I had facts to draw upon. Even so, I had therapist friends read it just in case I missed something while I was working on the overall plot. Details need to be realistic.

Until next time,
keep it real,



October 1, 2011

The Power of Eliminating in Writing

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Unless you are writing a stream of consciousness piece or a memoir, you might be overusing pronouns. Narratives too often use many pronouns, but are they really necessary to begin with? Practice writing by avoiding pronouns and instead add words of actions. Your written piece might just get a fresh new flavor. Try it. Take a paragraph or short piece. Circle all the pronouns and remove them.

If you don’t have a piece of your own to work on, try these sentences:

1. She walked up the stairs because she felt something was going on in her bedroom.

2. In her mailbox was a note from her mother who, she believed, loved her dearly.

3. His job was calling him to work overtime so he could pay for all the things his wife wanted.

4. He knew if he went to the movies he would run into his ex-girlfriend and her new boyfriend.

5. The cat played until it fell over and then it slept until they all came home from their busy jobs.

Re-write these sentences. Send them to me. Tell me what you learned.

Until next time.

keep the pen free.


September 6, 2011

Got a Second for a Smile?

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Maybe you don’t think you have a second because your job, family, friends, facebook, twitter and daily needs to eat and sleep take your entire day. I agree that there are activities we must do. Yet, there are also activities we choose to do like facebook, twitter, texting and the like. How we construct our days can become more of a choice than we sometimes want to realize. For instance, as a single woman I have to do everything from washing the car, to balancing the checkbook to taking out the garbage or doing laundry. I know that managing a life with or without help can be burdensome. That being said, it is important to remember that giving a simple smile, despite all the busyness, can make a world of difference.

Maybe you heard this story. A man walking down the street took a second to smile at a teenager. The next day the teenager ran across that man’s path and confronted him. “Remember when you smiled at me yesterday?” he asked the man. The man barely remembered. “I was thinking of killing myself,” the teen said. “But somehow when you smiled at me I felt a little better and then decided not to kill myself.” The man looked stunned; he barely remembered the teen let alone smiling at him. “Thank you,” the teen said and walked away.

We never know what is happening on the inside of people. One day when I owned a clothing store a male customer came in with his wife. I greeted them and the wife barely acknowledged me, although she was polite, and her husband seemed to have an attitude that had the potential to ruin my day. When the couple approached me for a small sale I asked what brought them to town. It was a tourist town and my shop was right in the middle of the hotel area. I smiled and made eye contact with the couple thinking they probably didn’t want to engage in any conversation with me. Then the man spoke. “We came here to bury my son,” he said, “he just committed suicide.” They stood in my shop for almost 30 minutes talking about what they were going through; they then asked me why I sold organic clothing. I sometimes wonder what would have happened had I not smiled or looked then in the eye. I wonder if I had just taken their money without acknowledgment of them, if they would have opened up to me. Another reminder not to judge people without information beyond what we see; we never know the road they are traveling on. I don’t know what my attitude would have been if I had been in the same position as that father; maybe it would have been more cranky. This link will take you to a page where you can purchase smile cards. Why smile cards? Why not! Hand them out. You never know who might need a smile. You never know whose life you might change or whose path you might lighten. And if you don’t think it will do anything for you in return, think of this: a smile uses every muscle in your face so you will get exercise in important places. Remember: a smile lightens the heart, yours and the person you are giving it to.

For all you writers reading this who would like to do something in addition to a simple smile, write a positive sentence, print it out on business cards and leave them wherever you go. When you go to lunch leave one on the table for the waiter. When you pass cars, slip them under windshield wipers. When you take a walk, drop them on someone’s doorstep. Who says writing has to be long and difficult. Write one sentence, pass it around. Write one word, pass it around. Write to heal. It works. Write to heal for youself. Write to heal for others. Speechless? Smile.

Until next time, keep the pen moving,


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